tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post115419585414293325..comments2024-03-23T11:22:28.132-07:00Comments on My Bottom Smarts: Story: The JungleBonniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154396563133050872006-07-31T18:42:00.000-07:002006-07-31T18:42:00.000-07:00Elis - Thanks. Every so often, I begin to feel as...<B>Elis</B> - Thanks. Every so often, I begin to feel as though my stories feel too formulaic. This tale was an attempt to tell a different story in a different way.<BR/><BR/><B>Tigger Too</B> - That's the purpose of fantasy, at least for me. It's an opportunity to imagine, and to ask ourselves, "What if?"<BR/><BR/><B>B_____</B> - Yes, but they're part of the scene. They help to illustrate the sacrifice the narrator makes to satisfy her captor.<BR/><BR/><B>Tigger</B> - Thank you, but I'm sorry to leave you in such a state with little opportunity for relief on the horizon. Here's wishing you a speedy recovery.<BR/><BR/><B>Eva</B> - I was purposely ambiguous in describing the whip. It could be a deadly single tail or a soft, sensual leather flogger. That choice belongs to you, the reader.<BR/><BR/><B>Mary</B> - Thanks!<BR/><BR/><B>Grace</B> - Let there be no doubt... It's steamy in the jungle!<BR/><BR/><B>Wind</B> - Thank you.<BR/><BR/><B>Doc</B> - I was making a conscious effort to break from my usual conventions. I'm not entirely satisfied with the second person style either, but it gave me a vehicle to focus the narrator's attention upon her captor.<BR/><BR/><B>Paul</B> - Thank you. As I mentioned to Eva, that whip could be anything from a crop to a flogger to a bullwhip, depending upon the reader's imagination. As a result, the scene can be as severe or as mild as you choose.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154377792119156102006-07-31T13:29:00.000-07:002006-07-31T13:29:00.000-07:00Great story Bonnie, really enjoyed it.Al fresco sp...Great story Bonnie, really enjoyed it.<BR/>Al fresco spanking was really hot for us, the risk added to the thrill, never used a whip though,<BR/>Thanks Bonnie.<BR/>Hugs,<BR/>Paul.Paulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03790580459962602757noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154376824112601032006-07-31T13:13:00.000-07:002006-07-31T13:13:00.000-07:00I thought it was very well done, but I've alsways ...I thought it was very well done, but I've alsways had trouble with sencond person. An interesting choice, what inspired it? The imagery was lovely and the picture to match really set the mood.Dochttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12031289798206758042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154374887229184002006-07-31T12:41:00.000-07:002006-07-31T12:41:00.000-07:00amazing!! i so love your writing.amazing!! i so love your writing.wind walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13837311871145991888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154363522776920402006-07-31T09:32:00.000-07:002006-07-31T09:32:00.000-07:00Wow, is it hot in here, or is it just me? Someone...Wow, is it hot in here, or is it just me? Someone turn on the fan already!<BR/><BR/>This was way too hot for me to be reading at 9 in the morning! Goodness girl, I just got out of bed, I'm sleepy, I've not had my juice yet...<BR/><BR/>Now I'm just all hot and bothered!<BR/><BR/>Great story!gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17341179673514109376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154363068468970902006-07-31T09:24:00.000-07:002006-07-31T09:24:00.000-07:00Hot, intenses fantasy there Bonnie! Thanks for sh...Hot, intenses fantasy there Bonnie! Thanks for sharing. <BR/>I am with B about the bugs.<BR/>Have a great weekendAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154358603951525232006-07-31T08:10:00.000-07:002006-07-31T08:10:00.000-07:00Ok Bonnie,You drew me in hook, line and sinker and...Ok Bonnie,<BR/><BR/>You drew me in hook, line and sinker and have left me deeply needy... it's been far too long for me, either spanking or lovemaking and much has happened to leave me extra desiring these days, yet unable to make good on any of it just yet. I'm still healing, and not dong a good job of it at all, actually.<BR/><BR/>My Dante took me into his arms last night and tangled his fists in my hair and kissed me with a ferocity that I haven't felt in ages, telling me how much he loved me and wanted to make love to me... leaving me breathless. And your story is perfect for me... the outdoors, the punishment, the release, the surrender and letting go... the harmony.<BR/><BR/>Perfection, dear Bonnie!<BR/><BR/>HUgs!<BR/>TiggerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154357037459184912006-07-31T07:43:00.000-07:002006-07-31T07:43:00.000-07:00Bravo, Bonnie!I was concerned about the bugs befor...Bravo, Bonnie!<BR/><BR/>I was concerned about the bugs before I got to that part. <BR/><BR/>b_<BR/>(who hates bugs)bellahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03734365238019123717noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154354619123578782006-07-31T07:03:00.000-07:002006-07-31T07:03:00.000-07:00Fun to read, but like you, I wouldn't want to real...Fun to read, but like you, I wouldn't want to really do anything like that, especially since I'm not really the outdoor type!!! There's way to much nature in that fantasy for me!!! LOL!!!<BR/><BR/>*hugs*<BR/>TiggerAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1154352406087782002006-07-31T06:26:00.000-07:002006-07-31T06:26:00.000-07:00Bonnie,That was so hot!!! Alone with your lover, c...Bonnie,<BR/>That was so hot!!! Alone with your lover, completely at his mercy, completely under his control, knowing what is going to happen and completly loving it. Great story!<BR/><BR/>ElisPKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02050453501744475319noreply@blogger.com