tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post113252303542501997..comments2024-03-23T11:22:28.132-07:00Comments on My Bottom Smarts: Story: The SphereBonniehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-54912614770593567782009-07-26T12:44:00.169-07:002009-07-26T12:44:00.169-07:00It is clear you understand the science for the sci...It is clear you understand the science for the science fiction. Flawless realistic details. Very well thought out. Easy to picture characters and events. The right balance of erotic spanking and science fiction elements, too. You are certainly a science fiction author now! Further, this story could easly become part of a full length novel or collection of relating short stories, so you should write more when you have time. --James of Norman OklahomaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-68572292202991025402006-10-19T05:03:00.000-07:002006-10-19T05:03:00.000-07:00Bonnie,
Very nice. I think hav to disagree about ...Bonnie,<br /><br />Very nice. I think hav to disagree about heavier toys though. I think they could be made to work just fine if the spanker had something solid to brace against and the spankee was suitably restrained. I'm sure that at some point all the better zero-g accomodations will include spanking benches firmly attached to a stationary surface. :-)<br /><br />bbobbbbobbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07614794259342926072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132610830814233302005-11-21T14:07:00.000-08:002005-11-21T14:07:00.000-08:00Ceeci - You're most welcome. It was a fun story t...<B>Ceeci</B> - You're most welcome. It was a fun story to write. It's been, um, floating around my brain for years.<BR/><BR/>May the force...<BR/><BR/><B>Little</B> - Thank you! It's enjoyable sometimes to try something a little bit different. It's better still when people like it.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132571217510081952005-11-21T03:06:00.000-08:002005-11-21T03:06:00.000-08:00Bonnie,Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading i...Bonnie,<BR/><BR/>Excellent story. I really enjoyed reading it. You're an amazing writer, and what an imagination you have. :) Thanks for sharing. :)little onehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14941936826330391228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132551479002180592005-11-20T21:37:00.000-08:002005-11-20T21:37:00.000-08:00Maybe it was the vino tube I opened earlier this e...Maybe it was the vino tube I opened earlier this evening, but I found myself floating with Tom and Karen. Thanks for the fantasy.<BR/><BR/>Live long, and all that...CeeCihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00379014051773420063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132538606748661402005-11-20T18:03:00.000-08:002005-11-20T18:03:00.000-08:00Anon,Thanks, and welcome to MBS. I've written man...Anon,<BR/><BR/>Thanks, and welcome to MBS. I've written many spanking stories over the years. But this was my first attempt at any kind of sci-fi. I don't know if I have another sci-fi spanking story in me, but if it happens, you'll be able to read it here.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132538263438969382005-11-20T17:57:00.000-08:002005-11-20T17:57:00.000-08:00Janeen,Thank you! I think a good story must have ...Janeen,<BR/><BR/>Thank you! I think a good story must have appropriate environment. After I chose the setting, there were all sorts of ideas that just fell out.<BR/><BR/>Take, for example, the Ride belt. Once you think about intercourse at zero G, it's almost unavoidable. Interestingly, in this scenario, it's the man's arms rather than his legs that make the difference. I believe there will come a day when lots of women own Ride belts.<BR/><BR/>Anyhow, I'm delighted than you enjoyed this story. I was concerned that it might be a too long and/or too different from anything else here.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132536913938722672005-11-20T17:35:00.000-08:002005-11-20T17:35:00.000-08:00I love sci-fi spanking stories. This one was very...I love sci-fi spanking stories. This one was very good. Do some more please.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-17086386.post-1132533255030670772005-11-20T16:34:00.000-08:002005-11-20T16:34:00.000-08:00Shyanne,I'm particularly pleased that you enjoyed ...Shyanne,<BR/><BR/>I'm particularly pleased that you enjoyed this story. I'm not a sci-fi writer. In fact, this was my first attempt.Bonniehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09061952016296339760noreply@blogger.com